In my opinion, brochure 1 still uses descriptive sentences that are too long, but there are written many foods and special items from Southern Alalak, so in my opinion brochure 1 is little bit persuade tourists to visit to Kampung Wisata Alalak Selatan.
In brochure 2 there is the sentence "Kami memberikan paket yang kami kemas secara apik dengan berbagai macam kegiatan seperti ber-snockling, gowes sepeda sambil menikmati udara pagi khas pantai yang mana akan memanjakan anda selama di pulau Tidung" this sentence can attract tourists to visit Tidung Island.
Like a brochure 2, brochure 3 also contains a sentence that can persuade tourists, like "Your closest encounter with wildlife starts at Taronga Zoo".
All the sentences in brochure 4 are descriptive sentences and this causes brochure 4 to be too boring.