In my opinion, Indonesian brochure as in the brochure 1 use almost only descriptive language, seems like wanting to fit every information in it. Though it's good, but it's more like reading a newspaper rather than promotional brochure. However, it's supported with nice pictures so it can be little bit helpful.
In brochure 2, I think, it's already using persuasive language and is to the point, but the pic positioning need to be improved.
In English brochure as in brochure 3, it is already using the eye-catching highlight to impress the reader in the first glance.
In brochure 4, it seems so crowded in the first glance, but it contains information that arouses the readers' curiosity. The pictures are also helpful.