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Comparing Brochures

Comparing Brochures

by Putri Wulandari -
Number of replies: 5

Brochure 1 and 4 is quiet similar by using more descriptive and less persuasive which makes the brochures a little bit boring. On the other hand, brochure 2 and 3 is more persuasive and less descriptive and makes the brochures look more interesting. Brochure 1 highlights the cultural aspect of the tourist destination meanwhile the brocure 2, 3, and 4 are highlights the natural aspect. 

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Re: Comparing Brochures

by Szahara Gita -

Could you please give example which part makes the brochure boring? 

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Re: Comparing Brochures

by Putri Wulandari -
Brochure 1 and 4 have a lot of text which makes the brochures is boring. In my opinion, a good brochure contains only important information and more pictures to attract the reader. 
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Re: Comparing Brochures

by diannisa kuncoro -

You said that the second and third brochures are more interesting. Can you give some tips so that the brochure can attract more readers?

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Re: Comparing Brochures

by Firdah Lia -

I agree with you about the highlight of brochures. Brochure 1 is specifically highlighting the cultural aspects of tourist attractions and the rest are highlighting the natural aspect of tourist attractions or destinations.