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Comparing and Observing

Comparing and Observing

by Siti Khofifatul Ulya -
Number of replies: 2

There are Indonesian and English language brochures. In my opinion, brochures in English don't use persuasive language in promoting their tourisms. These brochures are more descriptive and provide more information than using persuasive language. So, the English brochure are not balanced between the use of descriptive and persuasive language.

In reply to Siti Khofifatul Ulya

Re: Comparing and Observing

by Szahara Gita -

I think brochure 3 is more persuasive. Even it uses slogan to attract tourist to come to the destination. 

In reply to Szahara Gita

Re: Comparing and Observing

by Siti Khofifatul Ulya -

Thank you for your response Szahara Gita. I agree with you that brochure 3 is more persuasive.There, I just write my brief observation as a result and didn't add more specific observation one by one. In the brochure 3, not only the slogan that show persuasive language. But also the brochure contains persuasive language. You can read the brochure 3 (the content) that you will realize the persuasive part.